Goblin Kingdom – Volume 2: The Distant Paradise – Chapter 130: Sylph Unification War V

Goblin Name Cheat Sheet

The [Goblin] is to make it easier to CTRL+F

[Goblin]Gi Ga
The goblin in that estranged group that was with the protagonist when he defeated an orc. He is currently a noble class, the highest amongst the protagonist’s subordinates. He prefers to use the spear.

[Goblin] Gi Gu
The former leader of the village. He was pressured by the protagonist in his goblin noble form, and was added to his subordinates. He uses the long sword, and is relatively smart for a goblin rare. Became a goblin noble in chapter 39.

[Goblin] Gi Gi
Known as a beast warrior, a goblin with the ability to tame beasts.
He evolved while hunting spear deer with the protagonist.
He prefers to use the axe. His goblin class is rare.

[Goblin] Gi Go
A goblin with many wounds on his body. The food of his horde was stolen by the gray wolves, so he made a decision to follow the protagonist. He is the most experienced amongst the goblin rares. His weapon is a curved katana. He acts like a samurai.

Recently became a noble, and received the divine protection of the Sword God, Ra Baruza.

[Goblin] Gi Za
The druid goblin rare that recently joined them.

[Goblin] Gi Ji
A goblin rare. He evolved in chapter 37 after hunting with Gi Ga. He has the <> skill which makes him great for scouting.

[Goblin] Gi Do
Druid. Uses wind magic.

[Goblin] Gi Jii
Goblin Rare. From Gi Gu’s Faction. He is known for his <> which allows him to see his opponent’s weakness.

[Goblin] Gi Da
Goblin Rare. From Gi Ga’s faction. Notable skills are <> and <>.

[Goblin] Gi Zu.
Goblin Rare. The goblin favored by the Mad God (Zu Oru). Has the <> skill.

[Goblin] Gi Zo
Druid. Water magician.

[Goblin] Gi De
Beast tamer.

[Goblin] Aluhaliha
Leader of Paradua, one of the four goblin tribes and are known for their use of rider-beasts, which are essentially giant tigers.

[Goblin] Rashka
Leader of Gaidga, one of the four goblin tribes and are known for their valor and brutish strength.

[Goblin] Gilmi
Receiver of the title, The First Archer. He is the second in command in Ganra, one of the four tribes known for their rare ability amongst goblins to use bows.

[Goblin] Narsa
The Princess of Ganra. She is the only female goblin rare introduced so far.

 

Other Characters

Humans

Reshia Fel Zeal (17 years-old)
The priestess known as the saint. As the Healing Goddess’ follower, she lives to spread the word and teach righteousness. She has the divine protection of the goddess, and can heal others.

Lili (21 years-old)
She studied the famous sword style, Zweil Style, in the capital. She has sworn fealty to Reshia. And while she may have lost to the protagonist in one hit, she has proven herself strong enough to easily defeat three normal goblins.

Mattis (26 years-old)
The second son of a farmer. He’s largely responsible for drying the meat to preserve them.

Chinos (24 years-old)
The third son of a farmer. He plows the fields and is close to Mattis.

Keifel (28 years-old)
An adventurer who took on a request to escort Reshia through the Forest of Darkness. He’s strong enough that he could easily wield a steel great sword, but the protagonist still managed to kill him.

Zeon (32 years-old)
A follower of Ativ. He specializes in fire magic. In his battle against the protagonist, he used his fire magic, but still lost. In the end, he tried to blow himself up along with the protagonist, but the protagonist’s words agitated him, causing him to lose the opportunity.

Tinra (23 years-old)
A villager. She is one of the women used by the goblins as a breeding machine that the protagonist killed.

Ashtal Do Germion (59 years-old)
The king that rules the western region of the continent in which the Forest of Darkness and the connecting borders are included. He is a powerful ruler with seven holy knights under him. He has recently ordered three of those holy knights to search for the saint.

Gowen Ranid (45 years-old)
The feudal lord that rules over the region next to the Forest of Darkness. As one of the country’s strongest powers, he is renowned as the Iron-Armed Knight. He is currently leading his soldiers in a quest to find the saint.

Gulland Rifenin (31 years-old)
A former adventurer. As one of the country’s strongest powers, he is renowned as the Storm Knight. He’d been stationed in the northern mountains, but the king called him back to send him off in a quest for the saint.

Gene Marlon (24 years-old)
As one of the country’s strongest powers, he is renowned as Lightning-Fast Knight. He was previously stationed at the south, but the king called him back to send him on a quest to search for the saint. Killing is his favorite past-time. Whether it’s a man, a demihuman or a monster, they’re all just pieces of meat to be cut down before him.

Herculean Wyatt (40 years-old)
A member of the Blood Oath of the Flying Swallow. He specializes in handling great shields. He has a gentle personality, but beware for his anger isn’t one to be taken lightly.

Mage Killer Mill (19 years-old)
A member of the Blood Oath of the Flying Swallow. She is an assassin that favors the use of talons. Renowned as the mage killer, she is a mage’s worst nightmare.

Wand of Destruction Bellan (37 years-old)
A member of the Blood Oath of the Flying Swallow. He wields a fire staff. As a former knight, he cares a great deal about honor.

Hawk-Eyed Fick (31 years-old)
An adventurer with two names. He has exceptional perception and skill. He is currently searching through the Forest of Darkness under Gulland’s lead.

The White Hand of Life (Previously translated as divine hands) (Age Unknown)
A priest robed in white. She specializes in healing and support. Her age, name, and origin are all unknown.

Vitz (25 years-old)
A talkative sword-wielding adventurer. He’s actual strength isn’t bad, but he’s still far from being deserving of a second name.

Yugil (26 years-old)
An adventurer and an unwilling shield bearer. He might appear old, but he is actually still young.

Yoshu (26 years-old)
The younger brother of the slaves Gene purchased. The collar of obedience around his neck keeps him from going against Gene’s orders. Healers are rare, so he’s been made into a shield bearer.

Shumea (28 years-old)
The older sister of the slaves Gene purchased. The collar of obedience around her neck keeps her from going against Gene’s orders. Contrast to her brother who bears a shield, she uses a spear.

Household of the Gods

Altesia.
The Goddess of the Underworld and the Goddess of Valor. As the goddess the snakes serve, she has given her blessing to the protagonist. She is a dangerous woman with her deep jealousy and fierce temperament.

Zenobia
The Goddess of Healing. She has given her blessing to Reshia. She has also warned the protagonist to protect her. Altesia might hate her, but she doesn’t feel the same way toward Altesia.

Pitch Black (Verid)
A one-eyed red-eyed snake that belongs to the Goddess of the Underworld.

Twin-Headed Snake
Known to the goblins as the Lord of Decay. He is one of the snakes that fought the world with the Goddess of the Underworld.

Others

Selena
The elven woman Gene purchased. She became a slave after running away from her tribe.

Hasu
A high kobold. She is one of the protagonist’s pets.
The protagonist managed to tame her by giving her orc corps and other meat as bait.
She is a fortuitous kobold who somehow managed to become the leader of her pack.

Cynthia
As the pup of the gray wolves, she has been given the elven name that means lady of the lake. Reshia, Lili, and other children and women are quite taken by her lovely fur.

Gastra
As the pup of the gray wolves, he has been given the name of a wise human monarch that means sovereign of the wind’s howls. His uninhibited personality leads him to battle Hasu for ranks on a daily basis.

Bui
A timid orc. Gol Gol had taken a liking for him despite his small body. After Gol Gol died, he led the orcs to the west, but the protagonist managed to capture them.

Gol Gol
The orc king that attacked the village. He is a berserker who can use skills. He was defeated by the protagonist.

 

Volume 2: Chapter 130 – Sylph Unification War V

[table caption=”Status” colalign=”left|left|center|left|right”]
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Race, Goblin
Level, 55
Class, King; Ruler
Possessed Skills, Ruler of the Demon Children of Chaos; Defiant Soul; World Devouring Howl; Sword Mastery A-; Dominator; King’s Soul; Ruler’s Wisdom III; Household of the Gods; One-Eyed Snake’s Evil Eye; The King’s Dance at the Edge of Death; Magic Manipulation; Soul of the Berserk King; Third Impact (The Third Chant); Warrior’s Instinct; Blessing of the Underworld Goddess; Guided One
Divine Protection, Goddess of the Underworld (Altesia)
Attributes, Darkness; Death
Subordinate Beasts, High Kobold Hasu (Lv77); Gastra (Lv20); Cynthia (Lv1); Orc King (Bui) (Lv82)
Abnormal Status, Blessing of the One-Eyed Snake; Protection of the Twin-Headed Snake
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When we got word that the supply line was destroyed and that Shunaria had gone missing, we immediately dispatched the army. Shure, though pale-faced, led the elves and about 50 goblins to look for surviving people from the supply line, while I led the remaining 300 soldiers to march to Sheng.

If we didn’t set out immediately we could risk another supply line. That wouldn’t do.

“Fei, I’ll leave the elves to you. Keep watch and attack from a distance.”

“Alright.”

The surviving Gaidga goblins and Gi goblins formed the vanguard. We needed to attract the enemy’s attention, so it was necessary for us to move gaudily.

We met the enemy halfway the path from Jirad to Sheng.

“Enemy spotted! There’s about 150 of them! They’re about 4 kilometers away!” A scout reported.

I immediately came up with a plan.

“Take out your spears and shields! We’re assaulting the enemy!” I commanded, prompting Gi Jii to order the rest of the hordes.

We gradually increased our pace as we neared the enemy. Leading the vanguard was the enthusiastic Dashka of Gaidga, who wished to wash away the shame of defeat in his last battle, while the riders of Paradua rode at the flanks.

When the enemy came to view, they numbered 150 just as the scout had reported. They seemed somewhat frightened at seeing us. It seems they hadn’t finished their preparations just yet. I unsheathed my sword.

“Go!!” I commanded, and Dashka bolted off, leading the charge into the opposing elven army.

Gaidga’s brutish strength wasn’t enough to tear through the enemies’ armor. The most they could was to send the enemy elves flying with their clubs.

The enemy was donned in full armor and wielded long swords. A troublesome foe.

We were currently on the offense, but there was no telling how long that would last. Most of my force was made up of normal gobs. Letting Dashka continue fighting seemed to be the best course of action considering our stamina, but if they ran of steam, we would still end up as sitting ducks.

“Gi Za Zakuend!” I called.

“Leave it to me, Your Highness. The enemy’s frontlines shall crumble before our magic,” Gi Za said.

“Go!”

Gi Za took his druid horde and turned to the frontline.

“Fire!” Gi Za commanded, and a volley of magic rained upon the enemy elves.

“Nu…”

But a part of the enemy forces managed to repel even that magic. Are they using srilana or orichalcum? Either way, it’s troublesome.

We have the advantage in numbers, so as long as we’re able to get a good surround, we should be able to win.

“Ru Rou, Fei, take down their eyes. Ru Rou follow Fei’s commands and strike at the enemy forces’ rear guard!” I commanded.

“As you will!” Ru Rou replied, kneeling.

“Understood,” Fei replied.

After Ru Rou took the Ganra horde and ran after Fei, I turned my eyes back to the frontlines. The middle guard led by Gi Jii was supporting the vanguard led by Dashka, while Gi Za’s druids supported them from the back.

Gi Jii has gotten used to leading. He quickly reinforced the frontline whenever a goblin fell. His timings were impeccable.

In that case, I might as well go out myself.

“10 squads! Follow!”

I entered into the fray with 10 three-man cell squads.

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The enemy’s unexpectedly powerful attack caused Pale, who was leading from the back, to frown.

“The enemy is much stronger than expected.”

Even the heavy infantry leading the vanguard couldn’t overcome the goblins’ overwhelming charge. They had their hands full just defending.

More than that, the enemy goblins were strangely variegated, causing Pale to be shocked.

At the enemy’s vanguard were goblins bigger than the rest. They brutishly swung their clubs and pushed back Pale’s vanguard.

Behind them were smaller goblins with spears. Though ‘small’, these goblins were only smaller compared to the giant goblins at the front, and they were still much bigger compared to your usual goblin.

There were also goblins who rode on beasts who took a different path from the others and attacked Pale’s vanguard, and then there were goblins from the back of the enemy forces who persistently casted magic to support the enemy vanguard.

To make things worse, Pale’s archers were being suppressed by the endless volley of arrows shot by the enemy archers.

At this rate, their vanguard won’t last even with the srilana armor.

No, the enemy should be nearing their limits. In that case, Pale could eventually dispatch the yet untouched light infantry in her middle guard. Once they’re out, they should be able to damage the exhausted enemy forces.

If that doesn’t work, she could send them out to take the enemy from behind, cutting their path of retreat off. Either way, victory should be theirs.

Still, though, the goblins were fighting unexpectedly well. So well, in fact, that Pale couldn’t help but look on wide-eyed at the goblin forces.

To think the goblins were actually fighting in a formation. Not to mention, with persistence.

“They’re strong, but… I can’t lose.”

If she were to lose here, she wouldn’t be able to rescue Selena, as Shure Forni would surely destroy them.

To protect her comrades, she had to win.

“At my signal, send the middle guard in. They are to leave to the right and attack the enemy vanguard!”

Then Pale drew her bow and shot an arrow with unique feathers.

The light infantry behind their vanguard set out. It seemed like they were finally about to take the initiative and push hard into the enemy forces.

“GURUUuoooOAA!”

But just when Pale thought victory was in their hands, a world-shattering howl resounded throughout the battlefield.

When she turned her eyes to the foremost line, she saw a conspicuously giant black goblin jump out. In his hands were a long sword made out of orichalcum, and on his body were flames of black that acted like armor. Just the appearance of the goblin was enough to strike fear in the hearts of the elves and create a crack at their front line.

“Tch! Follow!” Pale immediately drew her bow and shot two arrows, signaling the elven archers at the back. Until now they have been shooting at will, but with the two signals she sent out just now, they stopped shooting and followed her movements. Those two arrows meant “Scatter” and “Follow” respectively.

That goblin cracked open their vanguard. If they left that crack alone, it would gradually grow, until eventually, their vanguard fully collapsed. At that point, they will have no choice but to retreat.

“Aim at that goblin!”

The elven archers have been shooting to suppress the enemy all this time, but now, they focused their arrows on a single target. If that goblin was the spear that would break their frontlines, then they would break it and leave the enemy with no strength left to resist.

Pale ordered the hesitating middle guard as she drew an arrow herself and aimed at the black goblin.

Winds, give me power!Wind Shot

An arrow that filled her vision shot forth toward the Goblin King.

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With the orichalcum long sword in hand, I cut down the enemy vanguard. Its durability fell faster compared to the other swords, but it’s good.

I lopped off the arms of three more elves before I severed their upper-halves.

“Onwards!” I commanded.

If we keep this up, we can push the enemy dead!

“Your Highness!” Gi Za cried out, prompting me to look up.

I felt my back char as I looked up, then I inadvertently took a step back at the sight that greeted me. An arrow clad in wind was descending toward me.

I deflected it with the orichalcum long sword, but there were more arrows behind it.

“Tch… Let my body be inviolable!Shield

Not good! They’re using srilana for the arrowheads!

My ether scattered as soon as I invoked it. I tried to brush off the arrows as much as I could, but several still hit me.

When I glanced up again, for a moment, I saw an elven woman.

She’s probably the first archer to shoot!

I heard the sound of another arrow shooting forth from her direction.

Is she the commander!?

“Gu!?” I groaned.

“Save the king!” Gi Jii commanded, then the goblins gathered before me and formed a wall. As a result, they ended up being covered in arrows.

Damn it!

“Enough! You don’t have to defend me!” I said, but when I tried to step through the gaps between the normal gobs, I heard some normal gobs crying from the sides. The elves had started to push in from the right. Because of that the goblins had to split their attention between two fronts, causing the vanguard to gradually fall apart.

—This is bad.

I racked my head hard, thinking of a way to quickly turn the situation around.

Even if we keep up our attack, the enemy probably won’t break formation anytime soon. If anything, our side is the one that’s about to break because of that new enemy.

Should we split ourselves into two groups and fight both sides?

No, that would be stupid. We’re barely pushing back the enemy as it is now, if we split our forces, we’d be basically handing ourselves on a silver platter.

What about the other hordes?

I glanced at Gi Za and his druids. They have been casting magic all this time. That only worsened when a new enemy platoon emerged from the right. At this rate, they’ll run out of ether sooner or later.

I turned to Fei and Ru Rou’s archers. They have been suppressing the enemy archers just as I have ordered. Thanks to their efforts, the enemy is unable to perfectly unify their attacks or move as they wish; the enemy is still somewhat able to attack together, though. How strange.

It’s curious how they’re able to do that, and I’d very much like to find out, but unfortunately, I don’t have the time to spare.

“They’re dispersing into the forest,” I mumbled.

With that the suppression fire of the archers will have less effect.

No choice. We’ll have to change the flow of battle here.

“Archers, focus fire on the emerging enemy! Stop their movements!” I commanded.

It would be foolish to start defending now after having come this far. If we did that, all that fatigue piled up after our ceaseless attacks might go to waste. We have no choice but to keep on attacking.

—Maintain the status quo at the frontlines while crushing the emerging army from the right!

Fortunately, the enemy emerging from the right are lightly armored. As long as we aim for the gaps in between, even the goblins will be able to handle them.

“Gi Jii, Dashka, Gi Za! I’ll leave the front to you!”

After the goblins nodded, I took the goblins under my direct control and headed for the emerging enemy from the right. The goblins are still weak from the battle, but we can’t rest yet. As we left our position, Gi Jii ordered new soldiers to fill in our now empty position.

Dashka bellowed out a roar and swung his club, then magic rained from above at Gi Za’s call.

“Hal, gather your horde and attack the emerging enemy!” I commanded.

This isn’t the time to be caring about some wounds. If this goes on, we’re going to lose.

We have our hands full just keeping up. the enemy has completely taken the initiative. Is there any room left for us to turn this around? Perhaps, if we’re able to wipe out the new enemy platoon, while maintaining the status quo between the vanguards, maybe then…

If so, this will be a battle of time. Will Gi Za’s horde run out of ether first, or will we destroy the right platoon first? If we can’t break through, we’re going to have to retreat.

—Damn it! Is this what I call a plan!? Fuck!

Though uncertain, I looked up ahead.

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“They’re still persisting!” Pale inadvertently said.

She was that surprised at the goblins’ persistence. The black goblin managed to fix their crumbling vanguard, and suddenly, it felt like they were the ones being pushed. The middle guard that went out to attack the goblins from the right were no longer able to move as they pleased because of the black goblin and the enemy archers.

That black goblin would appear wherever the enemy’s formation was about to break.

—He’s dangerous.

Pale’s instincts warned her of the threat that monster poised.

That black goblin hasn’t shifted to an all out offense yet, so Pale’s side hasn’t suffered much losses, but the moment that thing began its attack, they would surely suffer.

“Cover the middle guard!”

There was no reason for the middle guard to push themselves. Their only objective was to attack the enemy’s flank; half of their object had already been accomplished.

Pale was about to shoot another arrow to signal her scattered archers in the forest, but a rain of arrows descended where she was.

Pale dodged the volley of arrows as she rolled on the ground, then she shot an arrow to the sky.

At her signal, her archers once again drew their bows and shot their arrows toward the black goblin.

Let this arrow end this battle!

Winds, give me your blessing!Barrel Shot

The amount of ether poured into this shot was twice as much as last time. That in and of itself was a testament to its destructive prowess, but if it meant killing off that goblin, then it was worth it.

“End this battle!”

An arrow shot from Pale’s bow, and a great number of arrows followed behind it.

For a moment, she thought she saw black flames suddenly rise.

Those black flames moved to clad the black goblin’s sword in its ember.

The Goblin King used its might to repel the descending arrows.

Then more arrows shot for Pale.

She was being targeted. The enemy had already figured out that she was the commander. Their attacks would only get fiercer from here on out.

Thinking that, Pale resolved herself, and then took out another arrow to signal her men, but then something happened that left her shocked.

The enemy elves and goblins were dispersing, while the black goblin turned to the frontlines. Their vanguard, however, was gradually moving back.

“Are they… retreating?”

They most likely intended to retreat like this with the black goblin protecting their rear guard.

But why?

No, the only thing that mattered was that the Goblin-Forni Army was retreating.

Could they pursue them?

Their vanguard would chase the enemy’s rear guard, but then the enemy archers shot toward their archers who were scattered in the forest.

It was vexing, but the enemy thought this out well.

With this, they couldn’t carelessly pursue them.

“…But don’t think we’ll let you run so easily,” Pale said.

She had to strike when it was time to strike. The goblins’ rate of reproduction was just too frightening. If this battle continued, they would eventually have to strike down the goblins’ headquarters.

But first they had to pursue them. The fact that they’re retreating now meant that they’re thinking of the next battle.

Pale had to inflict as much damage as possible.

She shot an arrow to the sky.

It signaled: “The heavy infantry will lead the vanguard as we pursue the enemy.”

“Inform the detached force that we won, and are pursuing the wounded beasts now. We’re aiming for Jirad.”

A messenger was sent to the detached force led by Felbi.

 

—303 days until the battle with the humans.

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Level has risen.

55 => 57

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15 responses to “Goblin Kingdom – Volume 2: The Distant Paradise – Chapter 130: Sylph Unification War V”

  1. Azmi Noor Avatar
    Azmi Noor

    Thanks for the chapter

  2. RandomNameGoesHere Avatar
    RandomNameGoesHere

    Thanks for the chapter~
    Pale and the King finally meet, who is better?(though the reason is misunderstanding on pales part…). I think they’ll eventually be allies or Pale dies, one or the other~

  3. goblinrou Avatar

    Seems like difference in equipment is being a major disadvantage for our gobs.

  4. Just A Fan Avatar
    Just A Fan

    The old mongolian false retreat then charge?

    1. Chaoton Avatar
      Chaoton

      I think so too. IDK, it’s kinda weird for battle hardened Pale to not notice that but, well, in the heat of battle the chaos is real but if that’s really the reason why Pale couldn’t choose better I hope the author could portray it more in confusing manner.

      Or simply because she thought that the King is some another mutated goblin and being careless but she should’ve known better since they were pushed back so badly, she should’ve notice this anomaly.

      1. Drejzer Avatar
        Drejzer

        Would you expect tactics and deceit from wild, mindless, savage monsters?
        Goblins are thought to be stupid, savage, brutal but rather weak creatures, on the other hand there are fully armed elves with magic weapons, armours and proper commander (not to mention being the best race/species in existence (self-proclaimed))
        That makes it somewhat more probable for her to not notice, on top of that I don’t think that she was a commander but rather a somewhat experienced warrior/adventurer…

        1. Chaoton Avatar
          Chaoton

          Agree. It’s fair to say that she is but a monster slayer, not a tactician because no mindless beast that solely rely on its instinct ever use tactic and she seem to be pretty much green horn when it come to larger scale battle strategy.

      2. Just A Fan Avatar
        Just A Fan

        Quite frankly it’s a tactic that worked for centuries and probably still works today if anyone would actually try it. It’s really hard to check a soldiers natural instinct to take and hold new territory and pursue a retreating enemy. Both general and apes alike. Now it can backfire if you try it with less than well trained troops since they might actually get too afraid by the charging foe or not turn and fight together, but over all it worked damn well.

    2. Rise Avatar

      Or luring them in, trying to put themsleves in a more advantageous terrain

  5. Humping dog !!! Avatar

    Goblin King totally need an armor. It will be cool after this Elven war, Goblin King will have an armored division of goblins, elves and demihuman. Next war will be siege, humans will be surprise seeing an armored division of goblins lol. Hopefully elven armors and weapons loot can be reuse as goblin armor.

    Totally love this light novel, characters in this light novel doesn’t have insane cheat to make all his army to be OP and steam rolled everything. Ordinary goblins are still weaker race, they still need to work together and use quantity to defeat a powerful foe.

  6. GOBLIN KINGDOM FAN Avatar
    GOBLIN KINGDOM FAN

    thanks 4 the chapter!

  7. Chaoton Avatar
    Chaoton

    Thanks for the chapter~! It’s another extra long one, and extra fun.

  8. natan Avatar

    kill kill kill KiLLL kilLL ~ bloodbath ~ huehehehehe kill them aLL !1! ~ *LOL
    Thaks for u hard work …~ wait in hype now for next chapter ~

  9. Thedudeist Avatar
    Thedudeist

    pale is annoying, please die already. I hate it when sheet happens because of misunderstandings.

  10. Taggme Avatar
    Taggme

    Their only objective was to attack the enemy’s flank; half of their object had already been accomplished. ]] object ought to be objective.

    If you chose not to since it would be objective right after objective (which I think having two objectives is ‘okay’), you could do
    Half of their mission had already
    Or
    half of their/that task had already
    Or perhaps
    Half of that goal had already

    I do think “half of their” could be “half of that” depending on which option was used instead, thus their/that

    your choice of course. I am a fan of “that goal” but figured better to have options.

    Great work, looking forward to the rest!

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